Our Round Robin topic for this month is:
How important is a title? What attracts you to a certain title, and how do you
determine what to title your book?
A
title is as important as the first line of your book. It has to hook the reader
into picking the book up to find out more about what is between the covers.
Picking a title needs as much attention as your characters, plot, and setting.
A
good title should be easy to remember and be appropriate to the book. It could
also be a play on words or have a hidden meaning as in Luanne Rice’s The Perfect Summer, which was anything
but. It can come from your work in progress, or be named for one of your
characters. Georgette Heyer had several single name titles as in Frederica, Venetia and Arabella. Jilly Cooper followed in
similar vein with Pandora, Octavia
and Emily amongst others. There were
also her equestrian background titles Riders,
Mount, Polo and Jump. James
Michener often used a single title and, again, you knew what you were getting
with Texas, Alaska and Hawaii. All of these book titles tell
their own tale and give the reader a clear clue about the content of the book.
Authors
who write a series or linked books will often have ‘follow on’ titles as in
Mary Balogh’s First Comes Marriage, Then Comes Seduction, At Last Comes Love or Donna Alward’s Larch Valley or Cadence Creek series. The titles of these books set readers up with
what to expect. There is no cheating in them and there should be no
disappointments. However, no matter how good the title or how attractive the
cover, there really is no substitute for a good story. I fully admit to having
been drawn in by both title and cover and then sadly disappointed with the
content. There are so many good books on the market that if I happen to get one
that I’m not into by Page 5, then that book gets set aside.
In my
own work I prefer to create my titles from the content. They all start out with
a working title but by the end of the book that usually is changed to a 3- or 4
word title. My Berkeley Square Regency series has titles His Dark Enchantress and His
Ocean Vixen, a play on the male/female relationship. The next book in the
series will be His Unexpected Muse and
there will be another after that. So far its working title is simply Hester.
One point to be aware of is that titles are not copyrighted. If you wanted to use the title The Great Gatsby, then there is no reason not to. However, would you achieve the same success as F. Scott Fitzgerald? Hard to tell. Whatever your chosen title, plug it into Google or Amazon and see what comes up. If you have a truly original title, there's nothing quite as satisfying as seeing it at the top of the list. Again, no guarantees that your sales will go through the roof, but being Number One somewhere is always a good feeling.
One point to be aware of is that titles are not copyrighted. If you wanted to use the title The Great Gatsby, then there is no reason not to. However, would you achieve the same success as F. Scott Fitzgerald? Hard to tell. Whatever your chosen title, plug it into Google or Amazon and see what comes up. If you have a truly original title, there's nothing quite as satisfying as seeing it at the top of the list. Again, no guarantees that your sales will go through the roof, but being Number One somewhere is always a good feeling.
Check
in with these authors for their thoughts and opinions on the subject.
This is to be posted Saturday, Oct 22.
Marci Baun http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/
A.J. Maguire http://ajmaguire.wordpress.com/
Victoria Chatham http://victoriachatham.blogspot.ca
Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea
Judith Copek http://lynx-sis.blogspot.com/
Helena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com
Heather Haven http://heatherhavenstories.com/blog/
Dr. Bob Rich http://wp.me/p3Xihq-MI
Connie Vines http://connievines.blogspot.com/
Margaret Fieland http://margaretfieland.wordpress.com
Rachael Kosinski http://rachaelkosinski.weebly.com/
Rhobin Courtright http://www.rhobinleecourtright.com
Great advice to check Amazon to see if your chosen title is unique. My first book out bore the title I thought summed up the story theme perfectly, but once it was out, I discovered to my dismay that there were a dozen books in four different genres that had the same title. Live and learn, I guess.
ReplyDeleteI imagine that was most frustrating for you. From all this month's posts I've come to realize just how important a title is and that we all have some difficulty choosing the right one.
DeleteThank you for a practical take on the subject, Victoria.
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Bob
Well, I am a Virgo so maybe that has come out in my post! Thanks for visiting.
DeleteEvery blog I've read so far is getting me a little closer to finding my current WIP title. I like your play words and even the thought of possibly doing the opposite, although, at the moment, I can't see how.
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
Marci
Hi Marci - yes, this RR is great for getting some ideas isn't it?
DeleteInteresting. I like your method of choosing titles. What you say about quitting five pages in isn't unusual. Time to hook a reader in any type of writing is very short, and any glitch interruption can finish reading, too.
ReplyDeleteAnd I think today, with all the types of instant media we have, people's attention spans are shorter. At one time (long ago!) I would never not finish reading book whether I liked it or not. Now, however, it really has to grab me for me to continue reading.
DeleteHi Victoria, I like your mention of Jilly Cooper's titles. They are all short and punchy and became her trademark. She's an author who really knew how to use titles well. I liked all your other examples, too. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI think my favorite Jilly Cooper book was The Common Years. I used to work in a bookstore in England, fairly close to where she lived in the Cotswolds and was used to seeing her come into the shop. She was such a no-nonsense fun lady.
DeleteWow. You have an extremely thorough analysis of titles. A lot of cozy mysteries have puns in the titles which are always fun.
ReplyDeleteI think of writing books a bit like doing jigsaw puzzles. You have to put all the bits together to get a whole, so making sense of a title is akin to putting the whole book together. Or, breaking down the elevator pitch to be as brief as possible.
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