Our
Round Robin topic for April asks: Does the season ever play a part in your setting? How do you think seasons affect
setting and plot either physically or metaphorically?
Writers
are always looking for ways to enhance the drama in their plots and the nuances
of their characters. Just as we sometimes use the weather to create a mood or
direct the way a scene goes so we can make use of the seasons in both our
settings and in our characters’ moods.
I
have certainly used the seasons in my books. In my first Regency romance my
character, Emmaline, is abducted on a perfect September afternoon. By the time
she is rescued and returns home, it is a whole month later and the trees in the
estate park have already turned colour. In the second Regency, a lot of the
book takes place at sea and in Jamaica, but Juliana calculates that she left
England in January and it’s now September. In both books, the seasons are not
plot lines, but more indicate the timeline.
Janet
Evanovitch, in One for the Money, uses the season to describe Stephanie Plum’s
New Jersey ‘hood: During summer months, the air sat still and gauzy, leaden
with humidity, saturated with hydrocarbons. It shimmered over hot cement and
melted road tar.
In
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, J.K. Rowling writes of fall: Autumn
seemed to arrive early that year. The morning of the first of September was
crisp and golden as an apple.
Everyone
seems to love spring, with its hopeful sense of the summer to come, but Charles
Dickens writes: Spring is the time of year when it is summer in the sun and
winter in the shade, which speaks to the duality in this more than any other
season of the year.
In
the movie The Winter Guest, set in northern Scotland, the husband of Emma
Thompson’s character Frances, dies suddenly, leaving Frances distraught. Her
mother (in real life as well as in the movie) played by Phyllida Law, comes to
stay with her. The film opens with a shot of the mother walking across frozen
fields and with the camera later panning across a frozen sea. I’m not sure that
Frances’ grief would have seemed so soul-deep if this story had been set during
any other season but winter. The bleakness of the setting seemed to represent
the bleakness in her soul and vice versa.
Just
as light and shade and the time of day can influence the moods we try to create
in our story, so can the season. Let’s take a look at what opinions these
authors might have.
Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea
Dr. Bob rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-1A3
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Judith Copek http://lynx-sis.blogspot.com/
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.blogspot.ca/
Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/
Helena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com/blog
Rhobin L Courtright http://www.rhobincourtright.com
Dr. Bob rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-1A3
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Judith Copek http://lynx-sis.blogspot.com/
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.blogspot.ca/
Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/
Helena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com/blog
Rhobin L Courtright http://www.rhobincourtright.com
Victoria, I was particularly taken with your last example: the frozen landscape shadowing and deepening the inner anguish. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in, Dr. Bob.
DeleteGreat examples, Victoria. Enjoyed your post.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good topic as it really made me think.
DeleteYour use of winter was an awesome example of how a season and all it implies can impact the feeling in the story.
ReplyDeleteThe film was directed by the late Alan Rickman and the images created have stayed with me for years.
DeleteYour examples were right on the money. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting, Brenda!
DeleteI loved your examples, Victoria. I still haven't read any of the Stephanie Plum books, although they've been on my tbr for ages. Your post has reminded me that I've been meaning to read them, as they sound just the sort of books I'd like! I really enjoyed your post.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Helena!
ReplyDeleteWonderful examples.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in, Roxy!
DeleteInteresting topic. In my Novel, Tangle of Time, the local peasants in a medieval Yorkshire village, have to cope with dismal and dark November weather.On the positive side, they get to stay in bed longer. December comes in... "the days grew colder as winter nibbled at the edge of soggy November."
DeleteSince I’m a pantzer, my settings are in the season when I start to write the book. That works well when the book is set in Calgary because I simply walk outside to “research” the setting.
ReplyDeleteLove your examples!
And wasn't research easy yesterday? Have shovelled snow this morning and hope it's the last until next season.
DeleteGood post with great examples of seasons from Janet Evanovitch and JK Rowling. Beverley
ReplyDeleteThe Janet Evanovitch quote stayed with me ever since I read that book, and the J.K. Rowling one seemed appropriate as September is my birthday month and my favourite month of the year. I still love Keats' Ode to Autumn.
DeleteGreat examples in your thoughtful blog post. Maybe seasons help to set the mood because we deal with the changing four seasons believing it's a universal experience. But what about those children who live in the tropics? Even the kids in Florida who have never seen snow? Could they understand how cold the end of your nose can feel or identify with the magnificent miracle of leaves changing their colors in the autumn? Thank goodness for books who can give them a taste of the changing seasons. JQ Rose
ReplyDeleteSeasons certainly do change depending on where you live in the world. Thanks for dropping in.
DeleteGreat examples from a variety of writers. Like this post a lot.
DeleteThanks, Judy. This was a fun post.
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