Showing posts with label Black Beauty. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Black Beauty. Show all posts

Saturday, March 21, 2020

What Draws You Into a Story?




Just like that well-known actor I’m baaaaaccck! In January I was on vacation in Mexico and in February I was trying to reclaim my brain from all that sunshine, sand, and surf and a shot or more of very good tequila. And then came the downside which we are all dealing with in our own ways, and what better way to pass the time than read and write. So far, I must admit to more reading than writing, but here goes.

Our Round Robin topic for March is: what draws you into a story? Even though we authors are encouraged to write stunning back blurb, I am often disappointed when the blurb and the content don’t quite match up. It’s the same with covers. How many great covers have attracted you to a book and then the content in no way has lived up to it? I am a lot savvier now when buying books on Amazon as I ignore the covers and take advantage of the ‘Look inside’ feature.

First of all, does the writing grab me? Never mind the content or genre, do I want to read my way through the sample? Does the author use strong verbs and build a picture? Is there a question to be answered? Two totally different books are one of my childhood favourites, Black Beauty, and John Wyndham’s The Day of the Triffids

Anna Sewell’s Black Beauty begins: The first place that I can well remember was a large pleasant meadow with a pond of clear water in it. Some shady trees leaned over it, and rushes and waterlilies grew at the deep end.

Even as a child I remember thinking, why does Black Beauty remember this so well? And, after all these years, it says a lot for the writing and the content as to why I recall those two sentences so clearly.

John Wyndham opens The Day of the Triffids with: When a day that you happen to know is Wednesday starts off by sounding like Sunday, there is something seriously wrong somewhere.

OK, John, you’ve got me. What is wrong?

Strong characters will also grab and keep my attention. From my youthful bookshelf I recall Lorna Doone, Jayne Eyre, Heathcliff and Cathy, and Tess of the d’Urbervilles. There was Captain Ahab and Moby Dick, the whale being as much a strong character as the Captain, and who could forget Scarlett O’Hara and Rhett Butler? What about Atticus Finch in Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird? More recently Lee Child’s Jack Reacher has grabbed my fancy, as has Walt Longmire from the pen of Craig Johnson.

I may write historical romance but my tastes, as you may tell, stretch far and wide. If the characters are strong enough, I want to know what their motivation is. I will ride the roller coaster of their highs and lows, knowing that the tension in their stories will come to-hopefully- a satisfying conclusion. If there is a logical flow to the story, varying sentence lengths to make the reading experience easier and few, if any, clichés, then I am a happy camper.  

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Saturday, September 23, 2017

September's Round Robin Topic




Topic: What characters in other author's books have not left your mind? Have written a character who wouldn't leave you? Why do you think this happens?

We all have favorite books, sometimes too many to list individually. I could start with my childhood favorite, Black Beauty. From that classic, I went on to read others while at school. Admittedly, these were somewhat foist upon me because of my English courses, but I never forgot Austen’s Elizabeth Bennett or Emma Woodhouse, Bronte’s Heathcliff from Wuthering Heights or Paul Craddock from R.F. Delderfield’s A Horseman Riding By. But, without any doubt at all, I have to say that Frederica from Georgette Heyer’s Regency romance by that title, is my all time, hands down favorite.

Frederica was published in 1965 and I snapped it up as soon as it hit the store bookshelves to add to my already extensive Heyer collection. Since then I have read that book at least once every year. You do the math! The time between each reading is of no matter as the story comes across as fresh and as funny as the first time I read it.

It is, I think, her best romance. The Marquis of Alverstoke is tumbled from his bored and cynical heights by Frederica’s wit, charm, and unselfconscious beauty. The fact that she thinks about her rambunctious family more than herself is also a novelty to a man who is used to having his family apply to him for all manner of reasons, most of them financial.

This is a comedy of manners and a subtle construct of human behavior. Heyer cleverly uses the interactions between Frederica and her siblings to intrigue the Marquis who has little attachment to his young relatives, although he can be kind to them when it pleases him.

Frederica, more than any other book, is the book that tempted me to write Regency romance. I love the style of the era (if one is rich, of course), the elegance of the architecture, and the costumes.

When I started writing my first Regency tale, His Dark Enchantress, I never expected to write another. However, my hero’s sister kept intruding. Each time I started a scene with my heroine, Emmaline Devereux, Lady Juliana Clifton elbowed her way in. This carried on until I promised her a book of her own, which came out as His Ocean Vixen.

Neither of my heroines are wilting wall-flowers. Quite the opposite, in fact. But, even though Emmaline was my first Regency heroine, Juliana is by far my favorite of the two. I think it was because she had a little more spark than Emmaline, probably because she had siblings as foils whereas Emmaline was an only child and something of an introvert. Both young ladies were of superior intellect, something not much appreciated in that time.

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I think the reason that Juliana stays with me now, is that she is everything I am not or maybe is everything I would like to be. She has bravery and adventure stamped on her soul, whereas I would never consider myself brave and like my home comforts. Last year I came this close >< to going on a zip line but couldn’t quite bring myself to do it.

So what about the other authors in our Round Robin pool? Check out these websites to see what they have to say.